8:30 a.m. Nobody around me. I am sitting in my place waiting for the rest of my classmates. Something happens: emergency alarm sounding, steps in the corridor and a gunshot.
- This is giving me the creeps!!
Suddendly, the door opens.
I try to wake up from this dream, but nothing happens.
Cristina
I really like it! :)
ReplyDeleteI have just change the tittle of the story according the opinion of Pablo because he suggested me to write in the tittle something about the death. This is becuase I have changed it, and now I think it represents better the main plot of the story, and I think it makes the reader to start reading it.
ReplyDeleteyes, the title works. the ending is very claustrophobic, well done
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