The milk was flooding in every part of England.
Each corner of schools was full of milk. Quietly, shyly; each child drank his
glass of milk before starting school. Pupils became stronger, cleverer, and
sharper because of that. They felt better. Suddenly, the fire dragon appeared and did to fly every drop of milk.
Natalia del Ama, a dreamer.
After the class in which some classmates tried to improve my story I have change some of it. My classmate advised me that the title is not very surprising and I could write something related to the dragon, that I mention in the story. So I have changed it.
ReplyDeleteShe told me the story is great and original. Also, it talks about an important thing in Thatcher’s life. In addition, it is surprising and touching what has joined the real life of those children with irony.